viernes, 7 de noviembre de 2014

...After he died, he simply woke up listening again to the alarm clock next to his bed.

The next day he thought that he had to do something, the things could not go like that. After sometime thinking, he decided to fall in love to pass the rest of his day with anyone special. He waited for Rita at the reception of the hotel with some roses and looking so good. Rita was very impressed and Paul asked her if she wanted to go on a date, Rita accepted and they went to work with Larry.

In the end of the day Paul and Rita went to have dinner and get to know more about each other better. It was a good night and when they arrived to the hotel, Paul thought Rita was an excellent woman and he would not mind spend all his days at the same way, but with her.

The following days, Rita and Paul went out and discovered new feelings, the only thing that changed was how they felt toward each other and the rest of the day was the same routine.

Every time Paul's feelings were more intense and one day he confessed to Rita that he love her, that he wouldn't have survived that situation without her. Rita excitedly told him that she felt the same way and that the lately she has been completely happy.


Routine may not change but they would live each day differently, they would be in their bubble away from all. Maybe love can not change everything but it makes things better

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  1. ANGELICA AND BRAYAM: Excellent Worl!!!! Please take a look at the corrections below:




    After he died, he simply woke up listening again to the alarm clock next to his bed.

    The next day he thought that he had to do something, the things could not go like that. After sometime thinking, he decided to fall in love to pass the rest of his day with anyone special. He waited for Rita at the reception of the hotel with some roses and looking so good. Rita was very impressed and Paul asked her if she wanted to go on a date. Rita accepted and they went to work with Larry.

    AT the end of the day, Paul and Rita WENT to HAVE dinner and GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER BETTER. It was a good night and when they arrived to the hotel, Paul thought Rita was an excellent woman and he would not mind spend all his days the same way, but with her.

    The following days, Rita and Paul went out and discoveRED new feelings. The only thing that changed was how they felt toward each other and the rest of the day was the same routine.

    Every time PAUL´S feelings were more intense and one day HE confessed to Rita THAT HE LOVE HER, that he wouldN´T have survived that situation without her. Rita excitedly TOLD him that she FELT the same WAY and that the LATELY SHE has been completely happy.



    Routine may not change but they would LIVE each DAY differentLY day. They would be in THEIR bubble away from all. Maybe love can not change everything but IT makes things better .

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